Hyacinth

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Ronald Barker
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Hyacinth

Postby Ronald Barker » Sun 02 May 2021, 12:03

After last weeks meeting, this is my attempt of a Hyacinth.

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Franke07
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Re: Hyacinth

Postby Franke07 » Mon 03 May 2021, 14:23

Ron, great attempt, when I first looked at it, it reminded me of florescent squids :) - but that's just my imagination! I like the way you have chosen to eliminate the background, and the main stem of the plant, this takes it from being a straight forward shot to the start of something arty. Looks like you used flash - the highlights on the petals are a little hot, these can be brought down with the burn brush tool
Ronald Barker
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Re: Hyacinth

Postby Ronald Barker » Mon 03 May 2021, 16:01

Thanks Frank all suggestions greatly received.

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