Three lights

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Three lights

Postby davidc » Sun 15 Mar 2015, 03:53

Taken on a camera under review, another WIP and tweaked in my phone.

I think I'm going to move the jogger to the right hand side so he's running into the frame and boost his brightness enough to add a little more visibility/clarity.

Opinions/thoughts appreciated!

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Re: Three lights

Postby Mike Farley » Sun 15 Mar 2015, 11:56

The image is too dark on my (calibrated) monitor to see the figure clearly. I suspect that you are correct that the jogger would be better placed on the right to direct the eye back into the shot.

Incidentally, this image (and the night view of Singapore in your post) breaches the forum's requirements for both dimension and file size, which is why it displays as a link rather than being embedded in the post. You were only able to upload it as the restriction is not applied to to those with moderator privileges.
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