Ascending

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Ascending

Postby davidc » Wed 07 Nov 2012, 11:31

Continuing my spam of images for critique/feedback, this isn't traditional club fare but something about it appeals to me a lot. Any thoughts?

f5.6
iso 320
5mm
1/1000th sec

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Ascending by cedarsphoto, on Flickr
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Re: Ascending

Postby Rose » Thu 15 Nov 2012, 17:54

It's nice and clear, I like the ascending bubbles, but it's a shame that the angle of the diver doesn't give a clear image of the diver him(her?)self. There is a lot of dangling equipment which detracts and the flippers are not separated. The overall effect is a rather strange combination of shapes. I do like the hand though :)
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